Wednesday, 6 July 2011

Monday, 4 July 2011

feedback from aggie and lauren

good points
good narrative
lip synching was really good throughout
good shot transitions

bad points
shots could be confusing in relation to the story
too long an intro in silence
Good points:
Variety of shots.
Looked professional.
Fitted the characteristics of that genre music.
lip syncing pitch perfect.

Improvements:
Could have had a stronger ending.